Sunday, March 12, 2006

Then, when the birds had come and gone,
she smiled wanly
and put it away-
the old dreams, the old ways.

She gathered them in a bunch
and tied the knot
exclaiming
“It is finished.”

Slowly, life returns,
resumes patterns;
Known days and known ways
in familiar terrain.

Slowly, the winter breaks
and thaws;
The heart grows roots,
and finds comfort in staid days.

On some days though
there is a strange visitation-
the sky darkens,
the sun is shut.

And the birds,
they confer
around the corpse
in sibilant whispers.

Run, run from the birds
before they pick you out.
Run, run when you see the birds
gathering in the sky.

Run, run lest you fly with them-
just a black, black bird
hovering in the sky.
Run.

14 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

owwwwww!i can leave!!am sorry if my comments especially on the tag board seem slightly insensitive. but i was thinking that bad days bring out the best writing in you!and that jerk was not a bird, he was a monster!and you are far from being a corpse, so chill!

10:24 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

raps....doll..you do realise you overdo it sometiems?i am sure you dont mean to but i think you shold learn to just chill man.like that test says grow thicker skinned!it will even make you LOOK growner up:-D i hate to see you calling yourself a corpse.

10:26 pm  
Blogger Swathi Sambhani aka Chimera said...

u express it all so well.... i find myself mesmerized by these words (a reflection of my feeling at the moment)

10:06 am  
Blogger Twilight Fairy said...

"Slowly, life returns,
resumes patterns;
Known days and known ways
in familiar terrain."

am in the same state.. back in Delhi :)

new address, this one?

1:06 pm  
Blogger Eastmancolour said...

starting with a beginning to the core of feeling...
gathering around to describe
and then... the conclusion...like it just happened anyway!

golly... i can see you !
lady... be here more often..and i'll respond more often.
You'll see... that will be awesome :)

where do you people train to write like that ? jeeeeez !!! where IS the school ???

7:56 am  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

this is awesome.i'm totally amazed. are you somebody famous?

10:46 am  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice one there... sigh we are always running in some way or the other arent we ??

11:50 am  
Blogger Rapunzel said...

Karina- u assume too much!

12:43 pm  
Blogger Rapunzel said...

Swathi- :)i guess we all feel this way at certain points.i jus always make my emotions seem larger than life!!drama queen mode...?

12:44 pm  
Blogger Rapunzel said...

TF-welcome to hindustan!and yes, this be my new addy.

12:45 pm  
Blogger Rapunzel said...

EASTMAN-awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!you aint pullin my leg are you??*blush*

12:45 pm  
Blogger Rapunzel said...

Reggae-Popped-:-/ errr.....not yet!

12:46 pm  
Blogger Rapunzel said...

Pallavi-not always....but sometimes...yeah...there are days :(

12:47 pm  
Blogger Kunal said...

run...to where...another pasture, another meadow...another sky...??

6:51 pm  

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